Project Detail

Description

1. Need to rewrite "every sentence in the paragraph" into TWO unique versions.
2. The new sentences must convey the same meaning.
3. Good and understandable English with no grammar mistake.
4. All articles that I will provide are owned by me and therefore cannot be used in any method.
5. Upon completion, all articles will be solely owned by me.
6. You can deliver the written articles in txt or word format or in the same format as attached.
7. Payment is $45 for all the rewrites of 20 articles in which they'll be 40 new versions.
8. Delivery is within 10 days, and I will pay on the last day of submission.
9. If I like your rewrite, I'll be more than happy to work with you in the future.
10. If your rewrite is not good, no payment will be made. Honest bidders please.


Here is an example I did (it's not that good but I know you can do better).
Please see attachment.


There are a lot of people who would give a lot to increase their metabolism. Having a high level of metabolism enables one to maintain to burn fat and lose weight fast with the least amount of activity. Metabolism is the rate by which the body produces and consumes energy and calories to support life.


original sentence :
There are a lot of people who would give a lot to increase their metabolism.

unique version 1:
Many out there are willing to spend some money in order to elevate their metabolism.

unique version 2:
Some people who just happen to have a low metabolism rate are ready to do something to increase it.
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original sentence:
Having a high level of metabolism enables one to maintain to burn fat and lose weight fast with the least amount of activity.

unique version 1:
If one have a high level of metabolism , they have a tendency to easily burn fat and lose weight with minimal involvement of any body process.

unique version 2:
Someone with a good metabolism are able to maintain their body weight and also its easy for them to burn some of those fat and loose it.
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original sentence:
Metabolism is the rate by which the body produces and consumes energy and calories to support life.

unique version 1:
Metabolism is the organic process of the human body that are necessary for life where the body convert calories and generates energy.

unique version 2:
What we eat and drink will eventually converted into energy through the process of metabolism.


Additional files submitted:
Example rewrite.xls